Assesment Feedback + LR
WWW: You’ve written some well-developed, detailed answers here exploring the questions in some depth. This will be a fantastic skill in a real exam or assessment. You make specific reference to the CSPs which is important in exams and assessments and I like the details you have picked out (e.g. about female celebrities in the Reveal answer). EBI: For Q1, you need to answer the question – what is a convention? It is a typical feature. Your magazine cover example is perfect. For Q3, be careful with typos! You initially write ‘Tatler’ when the question is on Reveal. The other feedback for your Reveal answer is to focus more on how Reveal subverts some stereotypes of female celebrities – they are usually presented as perfect in terms of hair, make-up, costume etc. (a little like the image of Lauren in the top right of the cover). The use of paparazzi images subverts this with female celebrities presented in a more ‘real’ way, looking like ordinary women. This subverts stereotypes of celebr...